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Summer Cattanach's avatar

I think this story has so much depth and potential and when I was reading it I felt like the language wasn’t keeping up. Between the dreamlike narrative and tender pain it felt to be the reader contemplating this as a reality, I felt like the way it could’ve been told was just ALMOST what it was supposed to be. Does that make sense?

I’m writing like this too recently and find it’s difficult to maintain the voice and storyline but this was awesome and inspiring and I want to write my story now lol

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Jeannine Lawall's avatar

I don't see the world ending any time soon, but I can see we humans wiping ourselves out if we continue with our nonsense. Nature will survive. It always does, in some form or other.

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