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B Philippe's avatar

This is absolutely gorgeous!

Jane Dougherty's avatar

Thank you! I wrote it in the middle of the third heatwave, the megablazes and serial migraines. It’s an apocalyptic vision and I stand by it.

Daniil Frolov's avatar

I really enjoyed reading this. Great imagery. Powerful. Thank you!

Jane Dougherty's avatar

Thanks so much. It’ been a difficult week to live through.

Daniil Frolov's avatar

Oh Jane. Sorry to hear that! I hope next week is better! 🙏🫶

Jane Dougherty's avatar

The huge fires near us are under control at last, there’s been a bit of rain and the temperature has dropped from over 40°C and the firefighers are hopeful. The devastation is awful though, so much dead and dying, and the fire season is nowhere near over :(

Daniil Frolov's avatar

Oh no! All I can say is that I Hope things get better for you 🤗🤗

Jane Dougherty's avatar

Thank you xx For us here, it’s better already. The smoke has cleared. The two children in Bordeaux are still wearing masks to go out, and the wildlife won’t be resurrected :(

Daniil Frolov's avatar

It all sounds horrible. Thoughts go out to you and yours ❤️❤️

Stefan Baciu's avatar

This is one of my favorites, the second stanza is powerful and vivid. The central image works as a metaphor for so many things at all levels of being.

Jane Dougherty's avatar

It’s a poem straight from the gut. There are, as you say, many levels of anguish.

Anna Elisabeth Vale's avatar

knowing where you are and what you currently walk through this hits double hard....

i want to hug you now!! ♡