A poem I wrote yesterday in what I thought was a moment of lucidity. Not so sure now.
Goodbye Captain Nobody
cut power
cable snapped
the long slow drift into night
falling between the fingers of the stars
you
your sun too far
my moon too dark
in a mutually eclipsed tin can
there is
no power to cut
unmoored this ship
no bright edge giving out sparks
is this love in the dark
or the dark side of love?
This is a fantastic piece. Very deep
this is so beautiful and sad
i believe i felt this once in a way and this was such a bad time
"your sun too far my moon too dark"
that's so lonely heartbreaking